Be the best self-editor you can be!

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This is a 3 part editing series that will cover the Big Picture Edits, Paragraph and Sentence Level Edits, and Proofreading.

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edit without mercy….


Part 1: Big Picture Edits

Editing your story shouldn’t feel like an impossible task. All you need is to have a strategy in place, and you can be confident with your red pen and delete button when it comes time to edit your story. And – bonus, it will improve your writing! No matter what the scope of your project is; a picture book, a story book, chapter book or a novel, at some point you will have to edit your story yourself. Even if you plan on hiring a professional editor, they won’t do everything for you. They will return your manuscript completely marked up, with tons of changes to be made. And while it is great for you to have all your commas in the right place and make sure you don’t mix up too and to, you may be wasting your time editing spelling, grammar and punctuation if you end up omitting the entire paragraph. First you must edit your story structure and make your big picture changes.  

When I tell any writer or author that editing is my favorite part of writing process, I usually get one of two responses. The first is total confusion. “Why would anyone like editing!?” And the second is total shock or disbelief. “You’re crazy lady!” But let me officially confirm, the tedious, repetitive, overwhelming task of editing is the best part for me. The first draft is complete and the process of really developing your story begins. I am not naïve; I know the editing process is a common struggle for writers. Even as a seasoned editor, I have outsourced and hired an amazing editor for both of my books. I believe sometimes all you need is a second pair of eyes on your work to make it the best it can be. When we hired our editor for Champ and Nessie, I was looking for a developmental and proofread edit. For Sandy the Cat, our new picture book series, I needed a simpler copy edit/proofread. There are several different layers of editing, and knowing what you need and when you need it is half the struggle.

Typically, a manuscript will travel through the realm of a few levels of editing before it’s ready for the reader. If you’re a self-publishing author, you’ve likely either read or been told that you need to hire an editor. But a professional edit costs money, and while self-publishing experts will preach that it’s money well spent, not every author has the funds. With that being said, you don’t need to hire an editor for each kind of editing. Ultimately, what your book needs depends on your strengths as a writer. If you’re brilliant at outlining a book in a clear and logical way, or if you’re a master at crafting the perfect plot or story arc, you won’t necessarily need a big-picture edit. But if you struggle with explaining yourself clearly, or crafting realistic dialogue, your editor might recommend a paragraph-level edit. At the very least, every manuscript will benefit from a sentence-level proofread. If your editing budget is limited, you can be strategic about the services you select. Regardless of what your manuscript needs, working with an editor will help you grow as a writer — particularly if you approach the process with a willingness to embrace your writing weaknesses, and we all have them.

So…you’ve written your book. What now?

If you are anything like me, your first draft is a mess. The creative juice was flowing, your first couple of pages are pretty cohesive, but somewhere in the middle, you have a plot twist that doesn’t tie into the story, or a plot hole that needs to be reimagined. The climax isn’t long enough, or lasts too long. Your closing has no oomph. Maybe like me, you are writing a series and the final pages don’t carry your story into the next book.

The “Big Picture Edit”, known as the Editorial Assessment, is extremely important. You will read the book and note any big-picture issues. I find the best way to do this is to track your changes and leave yourself a full reader’s report on the manuscript, detailing any areas that are not working and that will need a big revision before you can do a more detailed edit. When you are doing your initial read through, think big. Are you planning to create any major plot reworking or additions to your story? As part of your initial read through, include suggestions on how to fix any problems that may appear in the manuscript. Make detailed notes so you can go back, page by page, to evaluate revisions. This is the most important step. Make sure you have addressed any major issues that would require a rewrite before going line by line to look at the words. It can be challenging to do a full line edit on sections of story where a major revision is needed. Big picture editing can be very extensive if you need to address a book’s structure after it has been completely written. The easiest way to address big-picture items is to get help structuring your book before you write it. You can do this by plotting your story. I created a story board layout template to help plot your story.

Pro Tip: If you know your budget will allow hiring an editor, hire one first! If you like the structure/layout/storyboard of your book before you write it, send your editor a detailed outline, or a detailed page plot summary to see if he or she can spot any potential holes before you begin. Note: This is not my process, but I know many writers who seek editorial assessment before they do a first draft. If you’ve written your book, but you’d like feedback on your structure, you can still send it to an editor. But keep in mind that your editor will need to read an entire book instead of a brief plot summary, and this extra time will be reflected in the cost.

Editing Part 2 coming next week! In the meantime, you can check out some other writing help topics below!

What is a BETA reader? And how to get the most out of your experience.

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When I sat down and finally pushed the publish now button on our labor of love, Champ and Nessie, I felt a mix emotions: I was overjoyed, relieved, excited. In the next breath I was filled with fear and anxiety, and then the dreaded “I hope someone will like my book!” popped into my head. Throughout the whole process I was so focused on researching all the things, writing, formatting, editing, illustrating, building my author platform and so on…I never thought “What if no one buys this? What if no one likes our story?” And the truth is, in those moments, I didn’t care. I was doing this for me. After laboring for weeks, months, and to be honest years on our book, I finally asked myself the question, “Now what? How do I know if this story is even any good?”

I discovered that many people rely on Beta Readers, or First Readers. People that give honest feedback, critique, and/or clarification on your latest “book baby”. After much research on the subject, I learned that before you eagerly drop your literary work of art on an unsuspecting Beta, there are a couple ground rules that can really help enhance your experience, and get the most our of your BETA Readers.

#1: Beta readers should not be writers (if possible).

This one is simple. A writer will critique your work with a writer’s eye, not a reader’s eye.

#2: Only choose 1–3 Beta/First Readers.

Ever heard the saying: too many cooks in the kitchen? Yeah, that’s a thing. If you get too many people critiquing your work it will work against you. Too many opinions, and too time consuming. Too confusing. Find 1–3 readers you trust. People who can give honest feedback.

I didn’t have to look too far for my BETA Readers, I asked a few colleagues I trust and my very dear friend to have a look at C&N several times throughout the revision process. Don’t send them into the story blind, send a list of specific feedback you are looking for. Give your BETA a clear outline of what your book is about. Send the synopsis, the category you are classifying your book under, the age group and genre of your book. All this will help them, help you better.

Ask them specific things like:

#1 Did the story hold your interest from the very beginning? If not, why not?

#2 Did you get oriented fairly quickly at the beginning? Where and when it’s taking place? If not, why not?

#3 Could you relate to the main character?

#4 Did the setting interest you and did the descriptions seem vivid and real to you?

#5 Was there a point at which you felt the story lagged or you became less than excited about finding out what was going to happen next? Where, exactly?

#6 Were there any parts that confused you?

#7 Did you notice any discrepancies or inconsistencies in time sequences, places, character details, or other details?

#8 Are there any characters you think could be made more interesting or more likable?

#9 Was the ending satisfying?

#10 Do you think the writing style suits the genre and age group?

Remember, your BETA reader is not an editor. They will be critiquing you only on the big picture, the storyline, and the characters.

#3: Print out a PDF of these questions for your BETA below!

Final thoughts….Let’s face it, at the end of the day, we write for ourselves. Not everyone is going to think your book is amazing. But facing that fear is a reality of writing and putting yourself out there. “To write something you have to risk making a fool of yourself,” as Anne Rice said. Having BETA readers truly helped my creative process. Understanding the mind of a child is one thing, but writing a book that parents can stand behind and encourage their child to read is an entirely different animal. It helps to have a few different perspectives, focused on the questions asked above.

When I read the edited final draft of the story back to myself, it felt so happy and proud of how far I had come. I honestly thought it was a home-run. Who wouldn’t want to go on a grand adventure across the Ocean? I mean, have you seen how adorable my Champ and Nessie are? Looking back, I want to yell at myself for taking so long to bring this story to life. I let my own insecurity stop me more times than I can count, instead of asking questions and getting feedback. I realized that putting my anxieties and self-doubt aside was the only way to move forward. I needed to put myself out there in front of the world, and only then could I truly consider myself a writer. And to be honest, it wasn’t until someone introduced me as a new author that it sank in. I thought, “Wow, I’m really an author.” I wish I could describe to you how great that felt, but there are no words. I can only hope that one day you will feel it firsthand for yourself. Happy writing.

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Story Book vs. Picture Book

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When I was researching Categories for our second book series, Sandy the Cat, I noticed there are only a few degrees of separation for each category of Children’s Books. Depending on where you look and who you ask, you will soon discover that all of these categories overlap, and it is important to focus on word count, not necessarily context when you are selecting your category.

Storybook, Picture Book, Early Picture Books? What category should my book be classified under?


This group is for 4-8 year old’s, kindergarten to grade 3 or higher.  While doing months of research, I found that text layouts that consist of six pages and up (at 200 words per page) are for older children and adults. Total word count can be 1200-2000 words. Most books I have seen in this category run five to nine pages (at 250 words per), or 1250-2250 words. So if your story is 1000-1200 words, I guess it could maybe fit in either category? (See what I mean about a few degrees of separation.) And actually since the word count has gone down for early picture book’s, it probably has for this group, too. Closer to 700-1500.

Story picture books or picture storybooks, do typically have more words, so the text to picture ratio is heavier on the text. In these longer story picture books, the illustrations are meant to help hold the listener’s attention and aren’t really an integral part of the story, at least not in the same way. These books often have text that might even take up the entire page, as they have more of a storyline and plot development. Typically, text and art are separated on the page, and the text could stand alone. Champ and Nessie is a Story Picture Book.

What we refer to as a Picture Book covers everything from pop-ups to e-books, graphic novels to non-fiction, baby books to sophisticated. A true picture book combines pictures and words to tell the story. One cannot function without the other. To understand the story fully the reader has to read both the illustrations together with the text, words alone would not be sufficient without the images. This is why it is important to have a great illustrator, Artwork is 50% if not more, of the story. In true picture books the text is pared down to just the narrative, illustrations fill in the description, and may include wordless sub-plots.


This category is often simply called a picture book. When publishers talk of picture books, they are probably talking about this group. Especially when the word count is considered to be no more than 500. I don’t now any child under 2 that can make it past 500 words, if they even make it that long. But 2-5 year old’s can sit still for longer periods of time. A picture book for this age child should be about 2-5 manuscript pages, or 400-1000 words. General rule of thumb, a typical manuscript page is 250 words and the number of manuscript pages for this age picture book is two to four, or 500-1000 words.

Below you can check out my Children’s Book Length Cheat Sheet along with our other FREE pintable’s and start writing your story. For more writing inspiration and FREE worksheets to help you plan your Children’s Book, click here.

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Sandy the Cat


Finds a Home and Finds Himself

Introducing a new Children’s Book Series by husband and wife author’s, Zebulan & Sherry Frayne. With beautiful illustrations by the talented Nicole Mayle.

Inspired by our real life Sandy the Cat, this heartwarming story will be adored by children, parents and cat lovers of all ages! Stay tuned, release day January 29, 2020!

Available for Pre-Order!

Just Write!

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Your First Draft

To write the first draft of a picture book text, just write a story. That’s is. Seems easy enough right? Keep in mind that you want it to be short and you’ll leave visual details to the illustrator, but, otherwise, write the story.

There are a few things you don’t have to worry about when you are writing a first draft.

  1. Vocabulary: Picture book vocabulary doesn’t have to be limited, because usually an adult is reading the story to a child. Don’t limit yourself on this first draft, you can always “dumb” it down later.
  2. Style: Just relax and just write. The first thing I like to do when drafting a story is print out my FREE Storyboard Template. It helps get my ideas lined up.
  3. Length: Remember you’re writing a picture book, and there will be illustration to depict your scenery. Get all your ideas on paper, it doesn’t matter much on this first draft, unless you go over 10 typed double-spaced pages. And even if you do, you will have content for your next book! Who knows, you could have a book series on your hands.

When I was drafting Champ and Nessie and Sandy the Cat, after getting my goal worksheet filled out, and typing up a story, I printed out several storyboard templates. I just started writing, filling the pages, and when I had the entire 32 page outline finished, the real work began. Everyone’s process is going to be different, but the steps you need to follow are the same. Utilizing a storyboard is the easiest way to organize your ideas, so you can discuss them with others on your team, and more importantly, you illustrator. Or if you are illustrating yourself, it will serve as a road map or you. A storyboard can be incredibly detailed, or not. The main premise of it is to identify key scenes and establish the timeline of how those scenes will play out in your story. The point of the storyboard is to provide visual clarity and keep everyone on the same page. It’s not supposed to be a work of art in and of itself. Next to or below each cell, fill in your description of what’s happening in the scene and you can even include dialogue that will take place.

When I say “Just Write” I mean it. JUST WRITE. You will be amazed where your imagination will lead you.

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One of the most common questions I get from new self-publishers is, “What do I put on the copyright page?” For some reason, the copyright page seems intimidating with its legalistic language and weird numbers. But it doesn’t have to be that way. There are many different ways to layout your copyright page. After looking at 100’s of books in my genre, I noticed that every copyright page was slightly different. Some were very simple, and some were more complex. I opted for a very simple copyright page for Champ and Nessie, and Sandy the Cat. There are a few things that must appear on your copyright page, but it’s up to you how much more information you want to add in after that.

What is a Copyright page?

The Copyright page carries the copyright notice, edition information, publication information, printing history, cataloging data, legal notices, and the books ISBN or identification number. In addition, rows of numbers are sometimes printed at the bottom of the page to indicate the year and number of the printing. Credits for design, production, editing and illustration are also commonly listed on the copyright page.

Do I need to purchase a Copyright?

Your book is protected by copyright laws from the minute you write it, but for added protection against theft, you can file for an official copyright through the U.S. Copyright Office. It is not necessary for the book to be published for you to apply for a copyright.

What Has to be on Your Copyright Page No Matter What?

The single most important element on the copyright page is, no surprise, the copyright notice itself. It usually consists of three elements:

  1. the © symbol, or the word “Copyright” or abbreviation “Copr.”
  2. the year of first publication of the work; and
  3. an identification of the owner of the copyright—by name, abbreviation, or some other way that it’s generally known.

Together, it should look like this: Copyright © YEAR, Author Name

Because the © symbol isn’t available on typewriters or most common computer terminals, the copyright symbol is often approximated with the characters (c). Unfortunately, this form of notice may not stand up in court. There are several places online you can download a template. Or you can copy and paste this symbol, as the quickest way: ©.

What Else You’ll Find on the Copyright Page

Many of these items may not be applicable to your book, but this is where the publisher has to fit all the legal notices and other information for use by the book trade. Keep in mind that a reservation of rights is vital, and the publisher’s contact information is practical and appropriate. So here’s the rundown of other elements on the copyright page:

  1. Reservation of rights, where you outline what rights you reserve and which you allow.
  2. Publisher’s editorial address. Larger publishers will likely include…Ordering information, Trademark notices, Catalog and Publication Data.
  3. Edition of the book. For instance, a second edition might or might not be noted on the title page, but will definitely be indicated on the copyright page.
  4. Printings and years indicators. These are the odd strings of “funny numbers” often seen near the bottom of the copyright page. This is for the use of the publisher’s production department, and is likely to become obsolete (or so I read).
  5. Lastly, some publishers use the copyright page to credit the contributors to the book including designers, production managers, proofreaders, indexers, and editors. I personally dedicate an entire page for my “Dedication’s and Credits”. Click here to download a copy of my 32 PAGE PICTURE BOOK TEMPLATE.

When it comes to creating your own copyright page, pick the elements that seem most suitable to your book. Keep the whole thing as simple as possible and you can’t go wrong. Especially for a Children’s Book’s, I would suggest doing a simple copyright, see below. Click here to download.

Nowadays, anyone can write a book and easily self-publish it. Not everyone aspires to be a Best Selling Author, but if you want your book to be a success, there are a few steps you need to follow in order to present the most professional book possible to your readers! Check out my resource library for more Self-Publishing Help and FREE Templates.

Anatomy of a Children’s Book Synopsis

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Your manuscript is ready, your cover is on point, your illustrations (if you have any) are amazing. Now, its time to write your book synopsis, or back cover blurb. You ask yourself, “Where do I begin?” Well friends, read on…

A synopsis is a one-page, single-spaced, summary of your book. Typically written in third person, present tense. The synopsis should give the reader a clear idea of what happens in the story. It should also be interesting to read and focus on the main characters and the driving plot. A great synopsis is compelling and will leave the reader wanting more.

Depending on your niche/genre, the type of information your synopsis will have can vary. If you are writing a children’s book blurb, you will want it to be playful or funny. Reflect the silly, adventurous, curious or loving nature of your characters. If you are writing a chapter book or novel, you will need to set up your synopsis to reflect the context throughout the story, without giving any too many spoilers. A good rule of thumb is to have a three part synopsis. Three paragraphs, pertaining to the beginning (1), middle (2) and end (3). When you read your synopsis, it should introduce us to your characters, the setting of your story/or premise of the book, and the event or circumstances that leads us into the climax. You don’t want to give away the solution, but merely get the reader excited to want more. And ultimately, buy your book to find out what happens.

When you start to write your synopsis, ask yourself these questions – Who? What? Why? When? They cut to the chase and will pull the reader into your story. Don’t get bogged down with detailed specifics, keep it moving and find ways to connect the plot points without slowing your reader down.

Try my FREE scrap sheet to help you brainstorm. Print out a bunch and just start writing down ideas. Take your favorite Who, What, Why and When and you will have the perfect points to draft your synopsis. When I was writing Champ and Nessie and Sandy the Cat I spent hours in Barnes and Noble reading the back cover of every single book in my genre. I read 100’s of blog posts, listened to pod casts. Connect with likeminded people on social media. You will be surprised where you find inspiration. I carried a notebook around with me and wrote down cute sayings, made notes about design layouts I liked, even the font and the layout of the text. Get inspired!

The number 1 tip I can give you is to try writing the synopsis before you write your book. This may go against traditional advise, but I find that it is easier to narrow down the specific points and talk about the main character. You can (and should) always go back and tweak it after you have finished writing the book.

Remember, a bad synopsis can sink your book, even if its amazing. Do your research. Read 100’s of book synopsis’s in your genre. You will be able to tell what a good synopsis is vs. a bad one very quickly.

I hope this helps you write an amazing book synopsis!

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Let me bring your words back to life…


Sometimes all you need is a fresh pair of eyes on your project. I know as an Author, writing is hard, even if you love it. You start a sentence, you stop…you think – is it good enough? You will read the same paragraph 20 times and still don’t know if your getting your point across. You go through waves of emotions, thinking – is my story good enough to publish? The answer is yes! Yes, it is! All you need is a new outlook on your manuscript. Re-focus. A little editing, a revision here and there, and boom! You will be well on your way to Self Publishing your story!

I am offering my services on a FREE Editorial Assessment. That’s right…100 % FREE. All you have to do is email, with the subject of your book and a brief synopsis and I will select 10 people to do a FREE editorial assessment. Don’t send your files until you have received the green light from me. I am a Children’s Book Editor, and Author of the Children’s Book Champ and Nessie. I also have a new Picture Book series coming out this January. My niche is in picture books, storybooks, and middle grade nonfiction. I have been freelance content creating and editing for 10+ years. Even if you need help finalizing your storyboard or just someone to bounce and idea off of, I can help. Follow me on Instagram for updates and Free Giveaways coming up this Holiday Season.

There is nothing I love more than diving into a manuscript and helping to pull out all its potential. I believe in collaboration, but also brutal honesty. Too often as an author it is difficult to see where a story is not being true to itself. That’s where I come in. It’s my job to tease out the scenes that are good and help you to make them great. To find the moments that aren’t quite working and figure out how to turn them into the strongest scenes in the story. Together, we can shape your book into what you always dreamed it would be.

I generally offer two rounds of edits. I consider both to be developmental editing, but I think many other editors may consider my first round to be an editorial assessment, so I’d like to carefully break out for you what is included in each round.

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In the Editorial Assessment round, I will have a read of the book and note any big-picture issues. I will send you a full reader’s report on the manuscript, detailing any areas that are not working and that will need a big revision before I can do a more detailed edit. I will also provide a marked-up manuscript with comments/tracked changes featuring my notes. As part of this, I will of course include suggestions on how to fix any problems that may appear in the manuscript, and am more than happy once you have read the report to go back and forth with you to discuss revisions. The benefit of including this round is that you have addressed any major issues that would require a rewrite before going line by line to look at the words. It can be challenging to do a full line edit on sections of story where a major revision is being suggested.

Below is what normally happens after the “big picture” editorial assessment. If you are interested we can discuss the second round of editing.

Developmental Edit
Once you have made the big-picture changes, I will then do my second read on the manuscript. This is the line-editing stage, which means that I will go line by line, paying attention to the specifics and how the words are actually reading. This is where the fine details get fixed. Do the words you’ve chosen seem appropriate? Is your character using vocabulary that is right for the age group? Is what you’re trying to say coming across properly? For this stage, you will get a word document back from me with tracked changes so you can see everything I’ve suggested altering. At the end of the day, this is your book, so my suggestions are simply that. You can take them, or ignore them if you disagree.

Although I recommend doing both rounds of edits, it is up to you whether you would like one or both.

Improving Choppy Sentences

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Although short sentences can pack a powerful punch in your writing, too many in a row become distracting to the reader. Choppy sentences may make your ideas seem disconnected, and your writing seem unsophisticated. If you find that you have a lot of short, choppy sentences in your writing, read on for a few suggestions to improve them.

When you have too many sentences in a row that begin with a simple subject, or repeat the same subjects in the beginning of a sentence, for example, She is, She was, She can…etc. Think about you how can rework that sentence. You can combine multiple sentences with a well placed comma to create one long sentence. Think about how you can show logical connections between your ideas by using words that show cause and effect. Look for words that show contrast, like such as, and then, just then…etc. Try and join your sentences by using phrases beginning with if, when, after, as, etc. You can manipulate the sentence and move phrases around to find the best way to convey your ideas to the reader.

Try and string together your minor details, you don’t need a new sentence for each piece of information. Think about how you can start your sentences in different ways. Think back to grade school, try a prepositional phrase or a dependent clause! Sometimes, you have to get back to basics.

When writing, it’s important to remember that variety is one of the keys to keeping your reader’s attention. Make sure you have a mix of long and short sentences, so you don’t end up with lots of choppy sentences that could distract your reader.

Happy Writing!

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Are you CRAZY about books? We are! And to show our love for reading we are offering Champ and Nessie’s E-Book FREE for a limited time.

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Side note – It is Champ and Nessie’s Two week Book-Aversary! YAY!

We are so grateful for the outpouring of love and support for our story, the last two weeks have been so amazing. I hope you will head over to Amazon and download a copy of Champ and Nessie’s E-Book FREE! If you do, please leave us an honest review on Amazon. Thank you!